Prompted, as so often, by Harriet Devine, I have joined The Sunday Salon, and this is my first post for this new venture. It might not be a good week to join, because the last fortnight has been a bit weak on the reading front. After a week's delightful holiday in Dorset, where I read little except books for the course I was on, about woodlands and local history - and not much of that, as our days were very full. Then, coming back, a lot of work had built up, with a lot of evening engagements too. So regular readers of my blog will have noticed a bit of a falling off in posting frequency - I promise to do better this coming week! But Dorset fed another passion of mine, for wonderful words - how about clunch, for hard chalk cut in blocks and used as a building stone.
But as I was in Dorset (whence these bluebells and mighty oak) for a week's tree and woodland study, it was natural to read Thomas Hardy's The Woodlanders. I haven't read any Hardy prose since my early 20s (though I read his poetry from time time), and I slightly dreaded this. And I was a bit right and a bit wrong.
It is horribly over-written and sentimental, and distinctly mawkish at times. But the fact that I now recognise the places whereof he speaks is fascinating in a slightly touristy, slightly self-important way - but I don't deny these failings in myself! Hardy has a fine feel for the landscape, though writing in the very late nineteenth century, about the early decades of the same century, he is already witness to a dying not a thriving world. I need not tell you the plot - as a very good friend said to me recently, they're all the same! But the novel opens with the sale of Marty's hair, a violation and a ravishing, when she hears of the loss of her love. There is then much worrying, a lot of distress and some vulgar glee, all washed down with a healthy sprinkling of dialect words. The story is compelling enough - though I was confident of much of the outcome from the very beginning - but it's absurd to consider Hardy a great novelist in the tradition of Dickens or George Eliot. Personally, I also find him much less accessible and pleasing than someone like Trollope, who for all his occasional shallowness and even sentimentality, is a fine teller of a story and a clean, easy writer to read.
Let me find a couple of sentences to demonstrate the frustrations and pleasures of Hardy for me. First, this paragraph is on the first page:
The physiognomy of a deserted highway expresses solitude to a degree that is not reached by mere dales or downs, and bespeaks a tomb-like stillness more emphatic than that of glades and pools. The contrast of what is with what might be, probably accounts for this. To step, for instance, at the place under notice, from the edge of the plantation into the adjoining thoroughfare, and pause amid its emptiness for a moment, was to exchange by the act of a single stride the simple absence of human companionship for an incubus of the forlorn.
Well! I'm wondering what this book I've just picked up is about, and I get dumped on with that! The physiognomy of a highway, incubus of the forlorn - these are heavy, artificial, pompous constructs, which really weigh down the page and make me gloomy, for sure, but with the thought of another three hundred pages of this, rather than anything else. And that sad little sentence in the middle, the contrast ... accounts for this, like some school textbook. But he can do better, either on landscape or with people, though description - fine and personal - often gives way to ponderous pessimistic theology, as here:
They went noiselessly over mats of starry moss, rustled through interspersed tracts of leaves, skirted trunks with spreading roots whose mossed rinds made them like hands wearing green gloves, elbowed old elms and ashes with great forks in which stood pools of water that overflowed on rainy days and ran down their stems in green cascades. On older trees still than these huge lobes of fungi grew like lungs. Here, as everywhere, the Unfulfilled Intention, which makes life what it is, was as obvious as it could be among the depraved crowds of a city slum. The leaf was deformed, the curve was crippled, the taper was interrupted; the lichen ate the vigour of the stalk, and the ivy slowly strangled to death the promising sapling.
He sees well, he loves the Dorset woods, and he can describe them beautifully - but then he has to impose that empurpled gloominess on us. I find it all too much!
That being said, I did manage to enjoy The Woodlanders, mainly for the pleasure of being in the same place as the story, and for the story itself. Giles Winterbourne is in love with one woman, and loved by another - and needless to say, he doesn't get either of them, and they both end up unhappy, and he ends up dead. Right at the beginning of the book, we are introduced to Marty, the girl that loves him, and she plays several important roles n the book - but coming in, as it were, from outside the narrative to move it along - the graffiti, the meeting with Mrs Charmond in the woods, the letter about her hair -but without being central to the story. I regretted that; I thought she was an interesting character, and I wanted to know more of her, and to follow her story a bit more closely. She starts by giving up her hair and her lover, and losing her father, and she ends by strewing flowers on Giles' grave: but in the meantime, we know little of her. She must have had other suitors, a living to earn; she is pretty, lively, intelligent - and I feel Hardy has deprived me of her company!